The best stoy I think is the "Raul the drummer from Chile", this story is very clearly with three paragraphs and true grammer. When I saw this story, i found it surprised me and I want to continue to read it. This story has clear topics with three main paragraphs. The author also use mark about the 13 things, it can let me count the things easily.


The worst story I think is "story with 13 things", which has no clear heading and complete structure. This story have no conclusion, so I could not find the main topic. Generally speaking, a complete story should consists with heading, main paragraphs and the last conclusion. This author write many words in each paragraphs.